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I think there are many good and bad things. Since I have no idea what you want to hear first I shall start with bad.
1. No vocals
2. To light and happy feeling
3. Not a good choice of sounds for mortal combat
I would consider making a remix of this remix using:
1. Darker melody
2. Vocals
3. Longer loop
4. Less clapping
5. Faster!
all and all 73.8%
Author's Response:
alright, will do for when i remake this
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This is good, but 4 things could be done to make it excellent.
1. Could be less repetitive. I just hear the same melody over and over again with a few breaks.
2. Club music has loud base, you should do the same if you want club music.
3.This is more techno, not something you can dance to.
4.Nice, but not necessary this could have used some panning.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for the constructive criticism.
1. This is one of my more noobi
2. I wanted a club bass, but i didnt really have too many instruments to work with so i went with the one that flowed the best but wasnt too 'out there'
3. I don't really believe the genre that i chose really has any effect on the song, but yeah your probably right
4. Hahaha i barley understood what panning was back then.
Thanks again for the review, helps me get better every song!
Keep checking in i have a song called [Dj-U] WaveForce coming out soon, it's a progressive trance song with a whole bunch o' arps and shit.
Dj-Unknown
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I can't stop laughing!
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This is bad, but it could be turned into something good. First of all get rid of the vocals, they did not seem to fit. Then get the echoing sound out of the background, replace it with some base. Lastly get some other melodies, not just two layers of echoing stuff. If you make a twilight explosion 2 i hope it's better.
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This is definatley going on my i-pod. Really cool what you did.
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This is one of your better songs, but there are a few downsides.
To start of with the beat is repetitive, but was a good beat. Second of all the vocals didn't quite fit the music. It needed to get a lot faster and hardcore for the vocals to fit in.
Good song. I hope they DDR it it sounds like one that would be.
Plus it loops perfectly.
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I'd like to say that the starting was good. I liked the claps and the drum beats. Then the beats got distorted. It was ok, but then the light bopping sounds came in. That made my ears bleed.
For next time you should make a less distorted version.
Author's Response:
I don't really see whats distorted about it, oh well thanks for the review
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"Don't know where the melody is from"
It's from butterfly upstage version. I was searching on Youtube for stepmania and I found it.
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This is amazing!!! I can't believe that something like this has only a 4.63 rating.
Now onto the scores.
Beat: 2/2
Instruments: 3/3
Progression: 2/2
How it fits together: 3/3
Total: 10/10 PERFECT SCORE!!!
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I agree with everything he says. Keep up the good work.
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